Make Your Manuscript Impossible to Ignore
Learning how to write a cover letter to a publisher can feel overwhelming, but I promise it’s not as hard as it seems. I still remember my first attempt—three days of agonizing over every word, seventeen rewrites of the opening sentence, and a 300-word rambling masterpiece that I was convinced would sweep them off their feet.
(Spoiler alert: it didn’t.)
Here’s what I wish someone had told me then: cover letters aren’t about being clever or impressive. They’re about being clear, professional, and showing that you actually understand what you’re asking for.
If you’re staring at a blank page, wondering how to introduce yourself and your book to the world, you’re definitely not alone. The good news? Once you understand what publishers are really looking for, it becomes so much easier.
Why a Strong Cover Letter Matters
Here’s a reality check: most editors spend maybe thirty seconds skimming your cover letter. That’s less time than it takes to microwave leftovers.
In those few moments, they’re not just sizing up your book—they’re sizing up you. Are you professional? Clear? Industry-savvy? Have you done your homework?
Your letter also shows whether you understand where your book fits in the market. Publishers don’t just invest in stories—they invest in sellable books. Demonstrating that you’ve thought about your target audience and market position can make all the difference.
Ultimately, publishers want partners, not just dreamers. A strong cover letter shows you’re ready to be both!
Understanding What Publishers Look For
Before we get into how to write a cover letter, let’s get inside a publisher’s head for a minute. They’re not sitting around waiting for the next literary masterpiece to change their lives (though they’d love that too); they’re running a business, and they need books that will find their audience and—hopefully—make money.
When a publisher opens your cover letter, they’re asking themselves four key questions:
Can I sell this book?
They want to see that you understand your genre, your target audience, and what makes your book marketable. This doesn’t mean your book has to be commercial fiction—literary fiction and niche nonfiction have markets too. It means you need to show you understand who that market is.
Does this fit our list?
Publishers develop a brand and reputation around certain types of books. A small press that specializes in literary fiction probably isn’t the right fit for your romance novel, no matter how good it is. Your cover letter should make it clear why you chose them specifically.
Is this author professional?
Can you follow submission guidelines? Do you communicate clearly? Are you someone they could imagine having a working relationship with? Publishers want authors who are easy to work with and understand the business.
What’s unique about this?
With thousands of books published every year, publishers need something that stands out. What’s your hook? What makes your book different from the fifty other similar manuscripts they’ve seen this month?
Key Elements of an Effective Cover Letter
Understanding how to write a cover letter to a book publisher means knowing exactly what to include—and what to leave out. A well-crafted letter respects the publisher’s time, highlights your manuscript’s potential, and positions you as a thoughtful, professional writer. These essential components will help your cover letter make the strongest possible impression.
1. A Clear Opening Statement
Start with a brief introduction stating the purpose of your letter. Mention the title of your manuscript, the genre, and the word count. If you’re submitting to a specific editor or agent, address them by name.
2. A Concise Book Summary
Provide a compelling 1-2 paragraph synopsis that highlights the core of your story or the main message of your nonfiction work. This isn’t the place for a full summary—focus on what makes your book unique and engaging.
3. Why This Publisher
Explain why you’ve chosen to submit your manuscript to this particular publisher. Mention any books of theirs you admire or how your work fits their list. This shows you’ve done your homework and aren’t just sending out mass submissions.
4. Your Author Bio
Include a brief paragraph about yourself, focusing on relevant writing experience, credentials, or anything that establishes your authority or connection to the subject matter.
5. Polite Closing
Thank the publisher or editor for their time and consideration, and mention that your manuscript is available upon request. Keep it professional and courteous.
How to Make Your Cover Letter Stand Out
Here’s what I wish someone had told me: standing out doesn’t mean being gimmicky or overly creative. It means being clear, professional, and genuinely engaging. Here’s how to do it:
Write like a human being. Use a conversational but professional tone. You’re not writing a legal document, but you’re also not texting your best friend. Find that sweet spot where your personality comes through without being unprofessional.
Be specific, not generic. Instead of saying “my book will appeal to readers everywhere,” say “this book will appeal to fans of Elena Ferrante and Celeste Ng who are looking for stories about complicated female friendships.” Specificity shows you understand your market.
Show, don’t tell. Don’t say your book is “hilarious” or “heart-wrenching.” Let your description of the story convey those qualities naturally!
Keep it tight. One page—maybe two if you have a genuinely compelling reason for the extra length, but probably one. Editors are busy people, and they appreciate brevity.
Proofread like your publishing dreams depend on it. (Because they kind of do!) A typo in your cover letter suggests you might not be detail-oriented with your manuscript either.
The Mistakes That Make Editors Stop Reading
Let’s switch gears from how to write a cover letter to how not to write a cover letter. I’ve made most of these mistakes myself, so I’m speaking from painful experience here:
The rambling opening: “Ever since I was a little girl, I’ve dreamed of being a writer…” Stop right there. They don’t need your origin story.
The humble-brag disaster: “I know my book isn’t perfect, but my friends say it’s better than anything on the bestseller list.” Confidence is good. False modesty combined with grandiose claims is not.
The spray-and-pray approach: Sending the exact same generic letter to fifty publishers. They can tell, and it’s insulting.
The rule-breaker special: Ignoring submission guidelines because you think your book is special enough to warrant an exception. It’s not, and you’ll just annoy them.
The TMI situation: Sharing personal details that have nothing to do with your book or your qualifications as a writer.
The amateur hour formatting: Comic Sans font, colored text, or any other design choices that scream “I don’t understand professional publishing.”
What to Do When You Don’t Have a Long Publishing Résumé
Here’s a secret that nobody talks about enough: most successful authors started with zero publishing credits. If you don’t have a long list of publications, don’t panic! Here’s what you can include instead:
For fiction writers:
Writing workshop participation, contests you’ve entered (even if you didn’t win), beta reading experience, or relevant life experiences that inform your story.
For nonfiction writers:
Your professional expertise, speaking experience, blog or newsletter following, or unique personal experiences that give you authority on your topic.
For everyone:
Your commitment to the craft. Have you been writing seriously for years? Do you belong to writing organizations? Are you actively working to improve your skills?
The key is being honest about where you are while still presenting yourself as someone serious about their writing career.
Making It Personal (But Not Too Personal)
One of the trickiest parts of writing a cover letter is finding the right balance between professional and personal. You want to show your personality without oversharing or being unprofessional.
Here’s how to thread that needle:
✔ Do: Let your voice come through in your writing style and word choices.
✗ Don’t: Share personal details that aren’t relevant to your book or credentials.
✔ Do: Mention if you have a personal connection to your book’s themes.
✗ Don’t: Turn your cover letter into a therapy session.
✔ Do: Show enthusiasm for your project and for working with this publisher.
✗ Don’t: Come across as desperate or overly effusive.
✔ Do: Be confident about your work’s quality and potential.
✗ Don’t: make claims you can’t back up or compare yourself to bestselling authors.
The Follow-Up Game: What Happens Next
Once you send your cover letter, the waiting begins. And let me tell you, it’s brutal.
Publishers can take anywhere from a few weeks to several months to respond—if they respond at all. Many publishers now operate on a “no response means no” policy, which feels harsh but is actually just a reality of the volume of submissions they deal with.
Here’s what you need to know about follow-ups:
Wait the amount of time specified in their submission guidelines before following up. If they say six to eight weeks, wait at least eight weeks.
Keep your follow-up brief and professional. A simple “I wanted to check on the status of my submission” is sufficient.
Don’t follow up multiple times. One follow-up is acceptable. More than that becomes harassment.
Don’t take silence personally. It’s not about you or your book’s quality. It’s about their capacity and current needs.
While you wait, the best thing you can do is keep honing your craft—whether that’s revising your manuscript, outlining your next project, or getting even more confident in how to write a cover letter that makes the right impression.
Your Cover Letter Is Your First Chapter
Your cover letter is more than a formality — it’s the first impression of you as a writer and professional. Be clear, respectful, and confident. Show that you understand your project, the industry, and what you’re asking for. You don’t need gimmicks — just a strong, sincere letter that connects your story to the right hands. Build that bridge thoughtfully; it might be the step that brings your book to life!
If your cover letter is ready and your manuscript polished, Atmosphere Press would love to see it! Submit your work to Atmosphere Press and take the next step toward publication.

Erin K. Larson-Burnett, Production Manager at Atmosphere Press (submit your manuscript here!), is a born-and-raised Southerner currently living in Katy, Texas, with her husband and their small domestic zoo. She is an avid ink drinker who lives and breathes books—during the day, she works remotely with authors around the world, honing and perfecting books published through Atmosphere Press. By night, she crafts her own stories…or at least tries to. The Bear & the Rose is her debut novel.