Balancing Different Character Perspectives in Your Novel

Writing Multiple-POV Books Effectively

When I first started writing, I was firmly in the single POV camp. My protagonists were the sole windows through which readers experienced my stories. But as I read more multiple-POV books and my writing evolved, I became fascinated by the idea of telling a story from multiple perspectives. I wanted to explore how different characters’ viewpoints could enrich the narrative, provide depth, and offer readers a more comprehensive understanding of the story.

Using multiple points of view (POVs) can be a powerful tool in your writing arsenal, but it also comes with its own set of challenges. Here, I’ll share what I’ve learned about balancing different character perspectives effectively, ensuring each voice is distinct and contributes meaningfully to the narrative.

Why Use Multiple POVs?

Multiple POVs can enhance your storytelling in several ways. They allow readers to see the plot from different angles, understand various characters’ motivations, and gain a more nuanced perspective on events. Here are a few reasons why you might consider writing multiple-POV books:

Depth of Characterization: When you delve into the minds of multiple characters, you can develop them more fully. Each character’s inner thoughts, feelings, and motivations add layers to their personalities.

Complex Plotlines: For stories with intricate plots, multiple POVs can help manage and unfold various subplots. Each character can contribute a piece of the puzzle, keeping readers engaged.

Different Perspectives: Multiple POVs can highlight contrasting perspectives on the same event, providing readers with a more rounded understanding of the story and its conflicts.

Enhanced Emotional Impact: By shifting perspectives, you can create a deeper emotional resonance. Readers can connect with different characters on different levels, making the story more immersive.

How Do I Plan Multiple-POV Books?

Before diving into writing, it’s crucial to plan how you will handle multiple POVs. Here are some strategies that have worked well for me:

Determine the Purpose of Each POV

Each POV character should have a distinct purpose and bring something unique to the story. Ask yourself:

What is this character’s role in the story?

What unique perspective do they offer?

How do they contribute to the overall plot and themes?

For example, in my current novel, one character provides insight into the political machinations of the story’s world, while another offers a ground-level view of the everyday struggles of ordinary people.

Keep the POVs Balanced

Balance is key. If one character’s POV dominates the story, it can overshadow the others and disrupt the narrative flow. Make sure each POV has enough page time to develop fully. A good practice is to outline the scenes for each POV character to ensure a balanced distribution.

Distinct Voices and Styles

Each POV character should have a distinct voice and narrative style. This helps readers differentiate between characters and enhances their unique perspectives. Consider their backgrounds, personalities, and experiences when crafting their voices. For instance, a soldier might have a more direct, action-oriented narrative style, while a scholar might have a more reflective, descriptive approach.

Writing Multiple POVs

With your plan in place, it’s time to start writing. Here are some practical tips to keep in mind:

Clear Chapter or Scene Breaks

Use clear chapter or scene breaks to switch between POVs. This helps readers adjust to the new perspective without confusion. Labeling chapters with the character’s name can also be helpful.

Maintain Consistency

Consistency is crucial in maintaining each character’s voice and perspective. Pay attention to how each character thinks, speaks, and perceives the world. This consistency will help readers stay immersed in the story.

Use Different Sensory Details

Different characters notice different things based on their backgrounds and personalities. One character might focus on visual details, while another might be more attuned to sounds or smells. Varying the sensory details can help distinguish between POVs.

Avoid Head-Hopping

Head-hopping, or switching POVs within a single scene or paragraph, can confuse readers and disrupt the flow of the narrative. Stick to one POV per scene or chapter to maintain clarity.

Challenges and Solutions

While writing multiple-POV books can be rewarding, it comes with challenges. Here are some common issues and how to address them:

Keeping Track of Characters

With multiple POVs, it’s easy to lose track of who knows what. Keep detailed notes on each character’s knowledge and experiences to ensure consistency. Tools like character profiles or timelines can be invaluable.

Ensuring Each POV is Engaging

Not all POVs will be equally compelling to readers. If you find one character’s perspective dragging, consider why. Are they contributing enough to the plot? Is their voice distinct and engaging? Sometimes, it might be necessary to merge or eliminate a POV to streamline the story.

Maintaining Pacing

Switching between POVs can disrupt the pacing of your story. To keep the momentum going, ensure that each POV advances the plot. Avoid switching perspectives too frequently, which can make the narrative feel disjointed.

Learning from the Masters

Many successful authors have written multiple-POV books to great effect. Studying their techniques can provide valuable insights:

George R.R. Martin in A Song of Ice and Fire series uses multiple POVs to weave an intricate and expansive narrative, with each character providing a piece of the larger puzzle.

Jodi Picoult often employs multiple perspectives to explore different sides of moral and ethical dilemmas, giving readers a comprehensive view of the conflict.

Gillian Flynn in Gone Girl masterfully switches between the two main characters’ POVs, creating suspense and revealing twists that keep readers on the edge of their seats.

Mastering Writing Multiple-POV Books

\Writing a novel with multiple POVs is challenging but immensely rewarding. It allows you to explore your story from various angles, creating a richer and more engaging narrative. By planning carefully, maintaining distinct voices, and balancing the perspectives, you can master the art of using multiple POVs effectively.

Remember, every character’s voice adds a unique dimension to your story. Embrace the complexity and depth that multiple POVs offer, and let your characters shine through their individual perspectives. With practice and dedication, you can create a novel that captivates readers and stands out in the literary world. For more personalized guidance on writing and refining your novel, consider reaching out to Atmosphere Press. Our team is here to support you every step of the way, helping you bring your unique story to life. Happy writing!

If you’re looking for a more general post on the different types of POVs, check out The Power of Point of View!

Erin K. Larson-Burnett, Production Manager at Atmosphere Press (submit your manuscript here!), is a born-and-raised Southerner currently living in Katy, Texas, with her husband and their small domestic zoo. She is an avid ink drinker who lives and breathes books—during the day, she works remotely with authors around the world, honing and perfecting books published through Atmosphere Press. By night, she crafts her own stories…or at least tries to. The Bear & the Rose is her debut novel.